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"This can't be happening to me", he thought, exhausted from trying to find a solution to either of his problems with Sarah and Michelle. He'd umed that confronting Michelle would help them reach some reconciliation or closure, but instead, it had pushed them further apart. Now, hoping that things would somehow return to normal would be foolish, to say the least. But he couldn't be bothered with Michelle as the moment. Not when it seemed like he was about to loose his girlfriend, Sarah, forever.